Caius Cadmus
May. 4th, 2007 07:55 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
foolish_m0rtalOkay, people, it's done. I had problems with the reading glasses, so I just drew some in. It looks kind of bad, but oh well. at least I feel happy about my disappearing handkerchief trick (check out his pocket; it's not there)
Anyway, thanks to Kasumi Sora- sempai, for finding the picture and to NF-san for sending it to me so I could edit it.
cheers.
http://s199.photobucket.com/albums/aa178/foolish_m0rtal/
P.S. I hope you'll understand; I looked back over the CaiKat chapter of C.F. and I basically said, "What the hell was I thinking?"
Bleh, so disgustingly mushy. Not realistic at ALL. It reads like a cheap BL manga.
And so, I'm editing it. Not very majorly, but some rather embarrassingly fangirl parts shall most definitely be obliterated.
Anyway, thanks to Kasumi Sora- sempai, for finding the picture and to NF-san for sending it to me so I could edit it.
cheers.
http://s199.photobucket.com/albums/aa178/foolish_m0rtal/
P.S. I hope you'll understand; I looked back over the CaiKat chapter of C.F. and I basically said, "What the hell was I thinking?"
Bleh, so disgustingly mushy. Not realistic at ALL. It reads like a cheap BL manga.
And so, I'm editing it. Not very majorly, but some rather embarrassingly fangirl parts shall most definitely be obliterated.
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Date: 2007-05-06 01:56 am (UTC)as for the chapter. I've been doing that when I look over everything Control-related...but unfortunately, I don't have the same luxury to change at this point, so I'm just trying to get it done...
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:15 am (UTC)H-He hasn't screwed him yet....
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:23 am (UTC)*sweatdrop* Boy this is getting awkward. *laughs*
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:26 am (UTC)*blink*
Oh crap. I see how it could seem like it was...something else.
Well *goes back and reads*
ah. If you notice, the next day Caius wakes up and complains about how many wrinkles are in his uniform.
I think Caius is too sensible to screw anybody that soon...
Thanks. I'll have to go back and clarify the tie thing. Gosh, this was awkward...
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:33 am (UTC)Points for making him more sensible at least. (I'm actually releived, but I loved your fanfiction too much to do more than just try to bluster my way through joking about it, really...*laughs nervously*)
Sorry, but it's not like I can talk. Sex is just about always a bad thing in my fics. I don't even want to get into half the content of GW... It's non-explicit, but...really...I think I need to lay off the Kaori Yuki or such... O_o;;
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:46 am (UTC)Truth: Caius is NOT the uke!
Caius: Damn right! Wait..er..but, I haven't done anything yet...
you know what though? I originally wrote it with them 'sleeping together' (euphemistically) after that party, and then I was like "Waaait a second; Caius wouldn't do that." So, I changed it to what you see now.
apparently, I didn't do that great of a job.
I added a paragraph I originally had in a later chapter. Basically, because it's so fricken cold in the winter, Caius and Katsuragi HAVE to sleep in the same place.
Whenever it gets warm enough, Caius is like "Okay, I"m going back to the couch."
Kat is like "Oh come on; I know you won't do anything."
and Caius is like "Eh, no. It's just too weird."
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:56 am (UTC)But still...I jsut ahve to say the phrase "so the old man bottoms?" jsut to see if I can get YOU to laugh. *snicker*
Ah so you changed it from Kasturagi goign all "ZOMG gotta get that tie off!" to "oh yeah...homosexuality's banend here, so we have no idea what to stick where!"
You've made me feel much better, because I had a lot of questions otherwise, but I STILL haven't given you that review, now have I? (DURGH!)
(now what would a miami girl know of cold? *snicker* I'd probably just go proudly off into a corner and freeze. ^_^)
I currently want to claw my eyes out over GW incidentally. It's making me write sex, but I'm writing it in terms of peopel talking about events AFTERWARDS, so you get a lot of gossipy misconceptions and such...yeah...it's fun...but it's driving me nuts because I hate the idea of having to write sex...it's just...useless...like there's not any plot to it. You can write implications for a lot of things without actually writing them in...
So...yeah...that's how you end up with two rapes, one incestuous freak running around promiscuously because he's repressing less than brotherly urges off on other people, one teacher messing around adulterously with a student, oh yes, and Rayyu turnign itno a snake and having some very weird dreams...
O_o;;
Cna you shoot my through the eye please? I don't know HOW I'm going to put this sort of stuff up, even WITHOUT the implications for Gabriel's shy hero-worshipping of Israfel in the background... T_T (I don't want to...I don't want to...)
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Date: 2007-05-09 09:42 pm (UTC)So...that's what did it.
Also...
So...Katsuragi's the uke?? O_O How'd they...? Ah never mind...I really should stop asking who told the secret gay couple how to...er...do stuff in your little fictional society...
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Date: 2007-06-09 03:36 am (UTC)all this is getting very awkward.
I move that we start a different subject.
So, got any other ideas on what Caius would be doing as a Ministry minion? I've already written about paperwork, Nandeis documents, and having to deliver stuff to ministers at very late hours.
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Date: 2007-06-11 08:16 pm (UTC)Hmm...I don't suppose he gets your standard office "fetch me coffee, slave!" routine? At least he's not working wih the nephilim...he'd actually have to fly who knows how many miles per day, and try to be diplomatic with the people being told they have to build all the crap his superiors are coming up with in their little "genius-art-student/enjineer/living-computer-brain think tank!"
If I were cadmus, I'd quit the job...*imagining*
*Cadmus accidentally answers the phone and has to talk to an angry person for forty minutes as the receptionist runs away*
*Cadmus gets stuck putting up decorations for the office party*
*cadmus ahs to track down who left butt-prints in the office copymachine--despite teh fact that the copy machine ahsn't been invented yet..*
Itsuki: Boy, I'd ahte your job. you look exhausted.
Cadmus: i need the money. *coughs discreetly*
*Legal drug plothole*
Kazahaya: MY LINE! *strangles* *gasps as he accidentally picks up by touch all the forbidden stuff with the prime minister* ZOMG! *runs away*
Itsuki:...wow...
Cadmus: yeah...weird...
Basically, I think Cadmus just gets work nobody else wants to do. Poor Cadmus... *sighs and pats his head*
Cadmus: hey, it's not so bad. I get dental. (ie. Katsuragi cleans his teeth for him?)
NF: really? Wow...there goes your villain potential...
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Date: 2007-07-23 06:24 pm (UTC)Yes, he doesn't really fetch coffee for people. And if someone told him to, he'd probably tell them to "Go get it your own damn self."
I can just see Caius putting up decorations and falling off a table trying to get the streamers to hang from the light fixtures.
Fire Marshall: That's a fire hazard, young man. *drags him away*
Caius: But...no! You can't take me away! I have filing to do! Prime Minister, help!
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Date: 2007-07-23 08:15 pm (UTC)Oh yes, I forgot, he has a bite to him. He might get along with the nephilim then.
Cadmus: *dropped into a meeting* Er...hello.
Rayyu: *stares then goes back to sketching*
Dubbiel: *glances* Hey. Don't touch my Absinthe. *goes back to his own mad-blueprint sketching*
Ragshiel: *re-enters the room exausted* They're going to let up build. But teh greek quarter's merchants are in an uproar.
Kakabel: *using his perfect memory* They're always in an uproar. This is the forty second time since Uriel's leaving. Offer them rights to trade with the African quarter for cloth and they'll be fine.
Ragshiel: *pants and smiles* Good. *eyes blueprint* Um...this is the design for the new quarters?
Dubbiel: Yeah. *looks at Cadmus* You! Make yourself useful and get me some bloody Mead.
Cadmus: *sweatdrop* Get your own damn mead you god-killing drunk ass.
Ragshiel: *sigh* I'll get the mead. who should I ask from the african quarter?
Kakabel: Nathanael, my father. *eyes Cadmus* who are you?
Cadmus: Er. Caius Camdus-where the Hell am I?
Kakabel: *looks at him a long moment* Oh dear, a plothole. Come, help me memorize these blueprints.
Cadmus: What? I can't do that!
Dubbiel: Go work the fields or something then.
Cadmus: Screw this! I'm going back to the ministry to beg for my job back!
Lafayel: *runs in with a fresh map* What's this bloody nuisance doing here?
Cadmus: Trying to maintain his sanity, tahnk you.
Lafayel: *stare* can I have him? I'll put him to work mixing ink.
Kakabel: *looks up at dubbiel*
Dubbiel: Done. Now mosey, already.
Rayyu: *raises his head and nods once*
Ragshiel: *Lafayel ignores him*
Lafayel: *grabs and yanks* Come on human.
Cadmus: Nooo! somebody! Help! I've been kidnapped by erasers!
Of course, even if he were to make a fire hazard, he's off in jail while everyone else enjoys the party and goes. "Hey, the fixtures are crooked."
Your poor Cadmus...
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Date: 2007-05-12 04:26 am (UTC)And your icon made me roffle. <3 Yaaay~!
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Date: 2007-05-12 03:03 pm (UTC)Avery with the roxorz maroon hat and the scooter?!
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Date: 2007-05-12 08:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-23 06:25 pm (UTC)