Caius Cadmus
May. 4th, 2007 07:55 pmOkay, people, it's done. I had problems with the reading glasses, so I just drew some in. It looks kind of bad, but oh well. at least I feel happy about my disappearing handkerchief trick (check out his pocket; it's not there)
Anyway, thanks to Kasumi Sora- sempai, for finding the picture and to NF-san for sending it to me so I could edit it.
cheers.
http://s199.photobucket.com/albums/aa178/foolish_m0rtal/
P.S. I hope you'll understand; I looked back over the CaiKat chapter of C.F. and I basically said, "What the hell was I thinking?"
Bleh, so disgustingly mushy. Not realistic at ALL. It reads like a cheap BL manga.
And so, I'm editing it. Not very majorly, but some rather embarrassingly fangirl parts shall most definitely be obliterated.
Anyway, thanks to Kasumi Sora- sempai, for finding the picture and to NF-san for sending it to me so I could edit it.
cheers.
http://s199.photobucket.com/albums/aa178/foolish_m0rtal/
P.S. I hope you'll understand; I looked back over the CaiKat chapter of C.F. and I basically said, "What the hell was I thinking?"
Bleh, so disgustingly mushy. Not realistic at ALL. It reads like a cheap BL manga.
And so, I'm editing it. Not very majorly, but some rather embarrassingly fangirl parts shall most definitely be obliterated.
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Date: 2007-05-06 03:56 am (UTC)But still...I jsut ahve to say the phrase "so the old man bottoms?" jsut to see if I can get YOU to laugh. *snicker*
Ah so you changed it from Kasturagi goign all "ZOMG gotta get that tie off!" to "oh yeah...homosexuality's banend here, so we have no idea what to stick where!"
You've made me feel much better, because I had a lot of questions otherwise, but I STILL haven't given you that review, now have I? (DURGH!)
(now what would a miami girl know of cold? *snicker* I'd probably just go proudly off into a corner and freeze. ^_^)
I currently want to claw my eyes out over GW incidentally. It's making me write sex, but I'm writing it in terms of peopel talking about events AFTERWARDS, so you get a lot of gossipy misconceptions and such...yeah...it's fun...but it's driving me nuts because I hate the idea of having to write sex...it's just...useless...like there's not any plot to it. You can write implications for a lot of things without actually writing them in...
So...yeah...that's how you end up with two rapes, one incestuous freak running around promiscuously because he's repressing less than brotherly urges off on other people, one teacher messing around adulterously with a student, oh yes, and Rayyu turnign itno a snake and having some very weird dreams...
O_o;;
Cna you shoot my through the eye please? I don't know HOW I'm going to put this sort of stuff up, even WITHOUT the implications for Gabriel's shy hero-worshipping of Israfel in the background... T_T (I don't want to...I don't want to...)